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I Asked of God

I asked of God, 'Where's heaven?' Now, sun's aura greets the day. Its light and warmth enable us to work, to grow, and play. I asked of God, 'Where's beauty.' His sun yields to evening's sky. Each rich-hued dusk of colors mark so well a day gone by. Then God showed me the peoples that make up the human race. "All that you see are children, please show them my truth and grace." I asked God, "Take me home now, I'm so weary, lonely, tired?" He answered, "Child, have patience, strive toward all things aspired." He sees me inside-out, this God and knows it's hard to wait. Life's trials are but a shadow of the glory past His gate. "Be patient, child, in all you do this journey's but a stay. My promise is of mansions, I'll return to lead the way." Common verse 4-14-14

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Date: 4/16/2015 8:00:00 AM
I think I would go with the child like wonder in your case Brian.
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Date: 4/14/2015 7:51:00 AM
A child like wonder is certainly a good place to begin. I enjoyed this piece very much.
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/16/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for your words, Richard. At my age, I hope it is childlike wonder and not 'creeping senility,' LOL. Be blessed as always.
Date: 4/13/2015 9:19:00 AM
I am thoroughly impressed by this piece! It is heartwarming truth! A beautiful read and a 7 from me!
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/16/2015 6:39:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words on my poem, I asked of God. Honestly, if I didn't believe deeply in a God I don't know where I would be. If it energizes anyone else in their walk, super. Be Blessed.

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