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I Am Winter

I Am Winter I am cold – not heartless, nor do I wish any harm. This is just the way it is, my gaze - a shivering chill, my kiss - a frosty sting, my breath - a numbing touch. I come alone – uninvited unwelcome, unappreciated to lull to sleep the cycles that need rejuvenation. I am angry – for you fear me - shut your doors, lock your windows, deny me but your harshest looks wrap yourselves in layers lest we touch. I am saddened – thus I whine dancing around your houses bending low the cowering trees weeping sub zero tears that never fall. I am Winter – and when my time is done you will rejoice that I have gone never thanking me – for the beauty that awaits. John G. Lawless 12/17/2014 Submitted to PD’s – Winter Poems #1 – Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/6/2024 4:07:00 AM
Hi John, This unique perspective of yours, your voice, is deserving of a wider audience. I really loved this older piece and now will add it to my fav collection.
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Date: 7/16/2023 2:02:00 AM
John, you know - if you did happen to be a self published vanity poet I'd buy your book. There's some seriously good stuff here you share for free - unbelievable.
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Date: 1/2/2018 11:04:00 AM
Came across this beautiful poem from 2014..well written.. articulate words.
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:18:00 AM
A beautiful poem, precisely and exquisitely worded. I often wonder about ‘free verse’ but this one gave me an aesthetic, emotional and almost physical thrill.
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:04:00 AM
Very visual and impacting. I like the irony at the end. Great poem.
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:45:00 AM
What an absolutely beautiful poem! What perfect time to be reading it since it is now bitterly cold.
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:31:00 AM
Yes, why not appreciate the beauty of winter? Beautiful words. Thank you.
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:29:00 AM
This is one of your best John. Each season has its purpose and each counts on the other to survive. ; ) 7
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2016 8:01:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment Connie. As it says somewhere "and a time for every season under heaven"...appreciate your support and high marks.
Date: 9/7/2016 10:35:00 AM
Your poem really grabbed me! I can feel winter sitting in the heat of the summer. Great write. Glad to find your poems. Kathy
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2016 8:00:00 AM
Kathy, glad you found the poems also and glad you like it. Thanks for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 1/27/2015 8:57:00 PM
Excellent write John, beautiful flow throughout and the last stanza is superb. A fave for me
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Date: 1/18/2015 5:08:00 PM
this is fantastic. So far all the winter poems are winners for me
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:44:00 PM
Genius, my friend!!!... Faving this one.. Congrats on a great win!...... Hugs... Arlene
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Date: 1/18/2015 1:27:00 PM
great job on this write ,nicely done, congratulations on your win
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Date: 1/18/2015 10:14:00 AM
I love your personification of Winter, John, and the way she speaks to us feeling that we have no use for her even though she prepares the way for rebirth in Spring. I very unique perspective. Congrats on your win! 7+Fav, Sandra
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:19:00 PM
I love your personification John,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:02:00 PM
Winter nicely personified, congrats on the win
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:42:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:23:00 PM
John, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/21/2014 7:54:00 PM
Very nice pen John! Enjoy read dear friend. A 7 for you! Wish you a very Merry Chritmas and yours! :) Love and light! xxx D.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/21/2014 7:59:00 PM
Thanks Dorian and a Merry Christmas to you also.

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