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I Am the Hurdle

I am the hurdle that needs to be cleared, The stumbling block in the way. All would be perfect if I disappeared; A rainbow would rise every day. I am the glitch and the knot in the chain, The obstacle smack in the path. Shutting me up would be everyone’s gain; My words seem to whet people’s wrath. I’m the impediment here to prevent What progress there is to be made. My purpose appears to provoke discontent, Like a welcome that’s been overstayed. Waking me up like a slap in the face Is the knowledge of how I’m perceived – As a hurdle to leap with no thought to embrace Any truth in the thoughts I’ve believed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/19/2015 4:35:00 AM
Ilene I am deeply saddened that someone could have offended you so badly but hey girl you have come back all guns blazing - a powerful write my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/18/2015 11:39:00 AM
GIRL! YOU OUTDID YOURSELF! WOW! They say, "You can't be great all the time" but when it comes to you, I strongly disagree!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/18/2015 9:00:00 PM
wow, judy! what a wonderful comment to get. this poem was inspired by someone criticizing me and telling me that i am a hurdle to be gotten over so i did what i needed to do to make myself feel better - wrote a poem about it! glad it resonated...
Date: 4/17/2015 8:04:00 PM
Hello Ilene... just another great poem to read from you through the structure and rhyme Ilene. I look forward to reading your next poem - Lindsay
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/18/2015 8:57:00 PM
thank you so much lindsay! i always love getting your comments...

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