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I Am Sure

I am sure A no brainer that fought like sin, Too much aggro for want of snogging, Lay in a fix of drugs in shooting gallery, Wearing the best of the bib and tucker, Became a crapshoot, a bunny rabbit that wore long johns, Wandered in main drag with ghetto blaster, Out of the rathole up to a ritz, Dreams smoked as fortitude failed, Guts were an eyewash, I was no fool, Giving up a think will turn on, A woman of today I wasn't born yesterday ! Written July 27th, 2015 For contest "Colloquialisms" by Laura

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Date: 7/28/2015 10:26:00 AM
Upma, wow totally tongue twisting, great for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13 and all your visits to my poetry
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:33:00 AM
- Really skillful written Dr. Upma - There's always a "light in the tunnel" ..... the one that is wise will find the exit - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:12:00 AM
Dr, Upma, I like how you cut the lines it makes the thought be intensified!!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/27/2015 7:14:00 AM
A fine touch here, Upma. Your use of symbolism is masterful.
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Date: 7/27/2015 6:49:00 AM
so cool, dr. upma.. i like this pretty neat piece.. huggs
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Date: 7/27/2015 6:54:00 AM
Thnx dear!

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