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I am hidden

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I am hidden

I am hidden 
Though I am in brood daylight
The light hides me
My face is hidden
My body obscure 
I am seen
But unseen
My voice lost
Still trapped in the air
Light is my friend
That works against me
But I am
Visible in the light
Just invisible
To you.

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  1. Date: 12/29/2010 7:18:00 AM
    Love the way it expresses the lonely feeling of rejection. Well done, Crystal!

  1. Date: 12/29/2010 6:47:00 AM
    Your light reflects off the stars forever, Crystal! good one!!! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/29/2010 6:14:00 AM
    i hate to say it but it's called unattracted. jhl

  1. Date: 12/29/2010 5:57:00 AM
    Intense and dramatic piece Crystal.. a great emotional write as well... expressing so well your inner feelings.. good luck with your own contest... if u need any help just ask the "Sweetheart"... enjoyed with luv... here is a Happy New Year toot to u from Ron and Me and sons... all four of them..