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I Am a Swallow

Turning and dipping in graceful, acrobatic flight, my spirit soars against a sky brilliantly blue; from these heights, I view life in its completeness, its complex boundaries and limitations sharply defined. I maintain my composure, calm and unruffled by the storms . . . I sail above the strife where the sun spreads warmth upon my wings. From this lofty perspective, I watch over my dearest ones. This clear air provides treasures of wisdom, beauties like the facets of precious jewels, sparkling with the vibrance that makes joy complete; I glean and feed them to my little ones, giving them nutrients to enrich their minds. Home is my central focus. I learn and implement all that I can to make my nest comfortable and complete, a rich environment for growth. Do not intrude; I protect what is mine. © May 11, 2015, Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 6/18/2015 11:10:00 PM
This is so lovely Faye. I see why this was a winner! Cheers, Connie
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Date: 5/26/2015 12:30:00 PM
Hi Faye, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for 'I Am a Swallow' poem! Very lovely. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/25/2015 10:45:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful! Congratulations, Faye!
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful, creative imagery! Congrats on your 1st place win, Faye! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:11:00 PM
Faye, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:20:00 AM
Faye, if you don't stop the swallow will be returning.....to your house.....(Capistrano is so passe). Beautifully written ode to the "mothers" of the world. Congrats on the top spot.
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Date: 5/24/2015 5:13:00 AM
very creative, congratulations
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:17:00 AM
Such wonderful imagery Faye. I can see why Andrea loved this:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2015 12:10:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN!! :D :D THIS IS SO LOVELY!!
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:08:00 PM
Faye, awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2015 10:00:00 PM
Loved it, well done Faye.....Seren
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:25:00 PM
This is perfection, Faye. Gosh, didn't you win first place in my LAST contest? what the heck!!! I have to also tell you I have a soft spot in my heart for swallows. they used to nest above our garage and they are truly protective of their young. I think they did not return to us because we got to curious about them and spied on them too much!!
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Date: 5/19/2015 10:48:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Faye. :)
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Date: 5/12/2015 9:42:00 PM
Enjoyed this one Faye!
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Date: 5/11/2015 7:39:00 PM
Hello Faye... a nice description from a gentle bird who speaks to us. We love the Welcome Swallows down under. Thank you Faye - Lindsay
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Date: 5/11/2015 4:53:00 PM
You are a delightful bird that dances gracefully in the sky, unruffled by approaching dangers. You make a nice and lovely mummy swallow! gl in the contest. // paul
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