I Am

I'll always remember you If only because of what you put me through But it made me see What I can truly be We all learn things in life I learned mine through strife I may have fell But it turned out well I am who I am The only bad thing in the end Is that I can't find my old self again Will it ever mend? I am who I am I have ran From myself Trying to see how I felt It's not there anymore The person I was before I think its Ok, I say I am who I am No matter what comes my way

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Sean L Sanders

Date: 8/1/2013 8:54:00 AM

Poet, very good poem. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poetry I'm thankful. it's good seeing a sister write so well a fan. Yes, I'm african American 100%

Caleah Buil
Date: 8/2/2013 2:59:00 PM

Oh thank you! That's so nice! I'm glad you liked. :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/14/2013 12:22:00 PM

I love this piece written here...it is very inspirational..your fan INK-U-SCRIPT..And one of my fav poets ;)

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/14/2013 12:47:00 PM

Thanks so much! I Always love seeing your thoughtful comments. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/10/2013 6:28:00 PM

This is a very special introspective piece. You will become more and more as your days continue and still in ways that matter you will be the same. A belated welcome to the soup, you seem a thoughtful young woman.

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/12/2013 12:59:00 PM

Thank you very much! :D Life struggles will change you, but there's a part of me that will remain the same, I hope.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/12/2013 10:25:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your win Caleah xx

Caleah Buil
Date: 2/12/2013 2:25:00 PM

Thank u so much! :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2013 5:26:00 PM

I like how you gave advice on chasing the blues by putting yourself up as the example. VERY nice and congrats for your win.

Caleah Buil
Date: 2/11/2013 8:34:00 PM

Thanks! Yeah, the best way for me to visualize it is for me to think if it was happening to me. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2013 9:20:00 AM

Caleah, a nice winning poem... Congratulations with your "Chasing the Blues Away" entry... Have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Daver Austin

Date: 2/7/2013 11:55:00 AM

Good, straight thinking, Caleah. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2013 3:23:00 PM

Caleah, :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"

Caleah Buil
Date: 2/6/2013 9:04:00 AM

Ohh thank you!!!!! I had no idea! :D Have a great week too! :D :D

Bethany St John

Date: 2/5/2013 2:36:00 PM

I feel ya! Another great write. Congrats on being featured :)

Caleah Buil
Date: 2/6/2013 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so much! :)

Justcallme Britt

Date: 2/3/2013 6:03:00 PM

Self-acceptance at any stage in life is a comfort. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Caleah <3