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I Admit it

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I Admit it

maybe it's wrong to think of you
and to wonder what do you do
but to think what wrong is about
it's one of the question i doubt

it's a blade that cuts through my heart
a monstrous feeling to depart
but why do i need to do it?
does it matter if I'll admit?

you will never have to bother
for I'm the one who will suffer
to battle with my own sinking
and to fight with my own struggling

i faithfully admit the truth
whether right or wrong it is both
a challenge for my soul to dare
well, who the hell are you to care?

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  1. Date: 6/2/2010 11:36:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nadifee. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 3:28:00 AM
    Somethings are so hard for me to admit. Well done on your poetry, have a nice one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 3:24:00 AM
    A nice admission. I enjoyed it