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frosted window bitter disconnectedness etched heart on glass.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2010 7:19:00 AM

I am feeling the urge to go back and read poetry from earlier writing of my favorite poets today and this is the one I opened of yours Larisa. I truly enjoyed reading it today and it is one of your best. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/16/2009 4:52:00 AM

Larisa, where are you and your wonderful poetry? Please come back to the Soup. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/8/2008 1:04:00 PM

This reminds me of one of mine. (Traces) I like the frosted window better. Nicely written. Love, Shar (Great to see you back!)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/8/2008 6:21:00 AM

Lovely Haiku! I can picture this!...~Carrie