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The old pen roles back and hard
a spank to ye hypocrites!
Depart from holy places of worship.

Initiating man to man wedlocks,
shame!  Shame!  Shame!
What do your holy books say?
Oh! You read 'em upside down!

What's sin to you?
Adam had Eve- a woman.
As wife! 
Shame to ye hypocrites.

Father, we plea forgiveness
they've politically compromised 
holiness with selfishness. Hypocrites!

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  1. Date: 6/17/2012 2:39:00 PM
    They be dim wits I say...yet their choice to be made...It is not my place to judge...again we all have to trudge...Peace and blessings