Get Your Premium Membership

Hypocrisy of the Village Flock

Hypocrisy within the Village Flock As the seasons of my life changes, glorious it may not be!! Valley bells summons the flock to chapel. Heavily polished Pews squeak, as Village flock take their seats. Distant ghostly voices ring out with such shallowness. “Chapel roof raised with such false faith” No attention paid to the sermon. The congregation floored by jealousy, as each man mirrored by his own status. Women competing, against their hats and frocks. Jealousy worms weaving through their gowns, feathers in hats, quivers as the coven moves through the vestry door. Minister excited to the jingles of the collection box whilst being passed around and around. my soul lays upon a bed of thistles. Whilst the thorned crown compresses the thoughts within my head. Lurking within the shadows of the cross . Whilst the gruelling over the sacrificial lamb So-called reputable men “ that should not be” The pitch pine pulpit, creeks with despair. Parishioners best clothed with shiny shoes, “all hypocrites congregate here”!! Layer upon layer of blasphemous faith, create a stain on uneasiness upon the so-called sacred walls . Each Private hymnbook worn by sweating hand, fidgeting tell- tales of fear through ware. Each before God and un- easy to what conscience they happen to bear!! “ If this is faith, then I want no more,” All false faces glance, finally and for the last time. I exit through the memories, OF that stained chapel door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/3/2015 12:01:00 AM
Wayne, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
In-Flight Avatar
Redkite In-Flight
Date: 9/3/2015 4:07:00 AM
Hello Linda, thank you for kind words and your warm welcome to this site. I can see that you have many pieces of work and have a many friends within the group. I have read two of your poems. So meaningful !!! Wow! great usage of words. Leave food for thought!!! will continue to read with great interest. Thank you again. Kindest regards Wayne
Date: 9/1/2015 11:33:00 PM
Wayne, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
In-Flight Avatar
Redkite In-Flight
Date: 9/2/2015 11:47:00 AM
Hello, I hope I'm addressing you properly by calling you Skat??? Thank you for your welcome and words of encouragement!!! I have read some of your work today with to with great interest. At this early stage I find it difficult to comment. What I will say is You are so different!!! Apart from your a remarkable usage of Word power you present as knowing your inner person and can express yourself in in a truly wonderful way. Saying that, your feedback from this site speaks volumes regarding your work. I will continue to read, digest and reflect with great interest. Kindest regards, Wayne Hugs to :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things