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Hypnotist

I listened as you spoke
Gums flapping in the breeze
Words slipping off the tongue
Expressed with so much ease

Your verbal gymnastics 
Deserve a perfect ten
I ask you one question
You repeat it all again

Your words enchant me
I listen while you sell
Some kind of hypnosis
I respond to your spell

I bow to your persuasion
Your rythm my blues
I want what you're selling
This thing I won't use

As I open my checkbook
The spell starts to break 
My brain starts working
When my hand starts to shake

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  1. Date: 1/15/2015 9:33:00 AM
    Thanks again Cynthia, I had forgotten about this one.

  1. Date: 1/15/2015 9:23:00 AM
    Yeah. They think they've got us . . . but, we've fooled them. MUHAHAHAHA LOL Loved reading this Richard. *S* Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/1/2014 11:46:00 AM
    Close call! I really like this piece. Didn't expect the ending there. Another great one! Always, Laura

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 8/1/2014 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Laura.
  1. Date: 6/20/2014 7:22:00 PM
    I hope you purchased the extended warranty too. ;)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/20/2014 7:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sure did!
  1. Date: 5/14/2014 9:01:00 PM
    Really enjoyed this, Richard!!!. So glad your first Poems are available here. I'm definitely coming back to read your old poems. Best wishes, -- ivo

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Love it. Like - "We're friends to the end." "Lend me five." "This is the end." Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 10:21:00 AM
    This would be a featured poem! Congrats Rick :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/2/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne, I like the new Photo.
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 2:42:00 AM
    LOL, funny stuff. I'm going to assume that the check didn't get written.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/21/2012 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are correct. Thanks for commenting Jon.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:32:00 PM
    Another breath taking piece! Wow! I might make this one a favorite :) you inspire me!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/25/2012 10:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, I am honored the people on site are so encouraging. Good for the soul. Have a good evening.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Oh yeah! Need an antidote for that. Nice!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/25/2012 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am in the Automotive business so I am not willing to provide an antidote, it could put us out of business.
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:26:00 AM
    Haha cute poem! Well done! :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:10:00 AM
    love it, well done xx

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 8:38:00 AM
    This is so awesome the reader stays engaged with each and every line in this poem from start to finish. Good job!