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Hutain Dreaming

Vivid streamers in my mind, as time came to a sudden stop. Within my dream I can rewind, the foreground or just the backdrop. Upside down, back or make it drop. The choice is mine alone it seems. For it is my hand there atop, the remote that channels my dreams.
Paula Swanson For the contest: Hutain This One Sponsored by, Nette Onclaud Placement: 3rd

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  1. Date: 8/4/2011 8:20:00 PM
    Well done. I really like this Hutain. Take care and congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 1:29:00 PM
    Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of nette,Paula

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 11:38:00 AM
    Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 9:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Paula. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:37:00 PM
    ooh, I love that idea of a remote that channels the dreams. Cool idea! Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 4:57:00 PM
    Congrats Paula on your exciting win with this wonderful piece of poetry my friend..kudos again..luv..

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 3:20:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 8:05:00 AM
    nice interpretation of a difficult picture ..."the remote that channels dreams" is exactly what Wordsworth was talking about in his phrase "that inward eye".....I often find that i have reinvented the wheel in poetry after i find that some famous guy wrote the same stuff 200 years ago L O best wishes as always Paula

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 8:06:00 AM
    very good Paula. Creative dreaming and writing in one. I looked at your pantoum contest this AM and though I'm not entering I came by to compliment you on your two poems there."my ink well and "evermore". Both lovely well written flowing poetry. You have alot of talent in your bank . Thanks for sharing