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Hush

Have I told you before that you make the stars hush? It's the truth, no need to blush Oh come on!, don't turn your face away because I have yet a lot for you to say I know that you are shy But to you i can never lie When I call you the most tender I truly mean it, to your eyes I surrender Oh! Now you're covering your face! Why do you insist on hiding such grace?! Put these hands down, let the sun shine You make me feel so grateful to be mine You light up my life and make it worthwhile I feel there's always still hope when you smile And it's okay, we can take it slow, no need to rush I just wanted to tell you that you make the stars hush

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/6/2015 1:39:00 PM
Lucky her! Nice words, man~~ Blackmatta
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/6/2015 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, Black matta so much for stopping by and glad you liked it :)
Date: 3/13/2015 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 3/14/2015 6:14:00 AM
Thank you,Debbie, so much :)
Date: 3/8/2015 10:31:00 PM
Very beautiful, is English your first language? You sure have a great command of it!!! A7 for me!
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 3/9/2015 6:22:00 AM
hhhhhhhhh :) ,Thank you Arthur for your kind words, so happy you liked it :)
Date: 3/7/2015 5:49:00 PM
What a beautiful romantic write with lovely imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 3/7/2015 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Jan so much, very glad you liked it :)

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