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my body aches with pain 
the thought of loosing you rips me apart
but the thought of you cheating on me destroys me
thanks to you its an everyday feeling
you say your sorry but i know its a lie 
thinking ill feel bad for you when you cry
i always use to think of you as a little piece of heaven 
but now i only see you as a heartbreaking sin 
i use to be so happy
but now im here writing this poem doing shots of vodka and gin 
its a fact
good guys finish last
wishing i could forget about the past
but the scars that it left reminds me  and brings tears to my eyes 
you use to be like a scar stuck with me for life 
but now i see you as a rash 

Copyright © ian schnitzler

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  1. Date: 12/1/2010 6:57:00 AM
    We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jan. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol