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Below is the poem entitled Hurt which was written by poet Destiny Echo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I can't tell you what it is I can't even tell you what it feels like I can only tell you that it's the worst pain You'll ever feel in you life It'll feel like every bone in your body is breaking Like every breath you take will be your last Like every muscle in your body is failing to support you And thats only the least of it. There is so much more! You eyes will feel like they're bleeding from all the tears you'll shed. You tounge will swell with words that you can't say. Your ears will make you question everything coming into them. And your heart, Well thats the worst part of it! It will feel as though its stopped beating... And who knows, maybe it has.

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  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Oh my giraffe you can trap sadness with words.

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 9:05:00 PM
    Wow heart wreching! Few people will know a pain like this and even fewer could describe it so ellegantly. Also just wanted to say that upon looking back on my profile i realized you were the first person to comment on any of my poetry! Thanks!

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Wery well written,thank you for sharing this poem Destiny. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 12:58:00 PM
    Wow! That reads like a seizure!And they suck!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 12/5/2011 11:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I had to come back and let you know that this is one of my fav's..I know what this hurt feels like. :o(