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Hurricane 5

Hurricane 5 One flower almost gray but visibly not Brushed by a breeze along the corner Open to suggestions In concrete wetness More than several shapes take hold Spin in In Place And at turns to be made left or right of reason As gray turns to black Pressure rises Barometers break They can’t seize the moment alone Palm trees hang like suspended paragraphs On news wires leaning Hurricane 5 uproots them all in time As lines dangle in pain Without a moment’s notice Roads clear No traffic… No trees… No people… All moved off in an instant With the mystery of the storm 5/24/14 contest- Gone With The Wind

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Date: 5/14/2015 5:51:00 PM
Earl, Congrats on the nice win. SKAT love
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 5/14/2015 8:59:00 PM
Hi SKAT! Thanks! I appreciate your comments. Take care. Earl
Date: 5/10/2015 4:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the Jadazzle United contest. I am sorry Darren wasn't around to do the final judging with me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:47:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you. I actually lived through 2 killer hurricanes here in Miami that completely destroyed my neighborhood and we sustained considerable property damage as well. Every traffic signal and large trees were destroyed for miles around also. It looked and felt just like a war zone. I hope you are doing well. Have a pleasant evening. Earl

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