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Huntin Seeson One

wilbur went hunting for goose winnie’s goosey got loose wilbur shot it winnie had fit around wilbur’s neck a tight noose

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Date: 10/23/2016 4:50:00 PM

Lol! This is funny. Wilbur will know next time:-)Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/23/2016 9:54:00 PM

I dunno, Wibur is a slow learner;-)

Date: 10/23/2016 2:54:00 PM

Lol!

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/23/2016 9:53:00 PM

Hi Mike! glad ya got a chuckle

Date: 10/23/2016 9:47:00 AM

The noose was wrapped around so tight...to get himself free he did fight...as he tugged.... it's fibers hugged....until he saw the brightest lights

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/23/2016 9:53:00 PM

The brightest lights are just before blackout? jus sayin;-) Jack'd say it's no use to struggle:-)

Date: 10/23/2016 8:40:00 AM

That'll learn him! :)

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/23/2016 9:52:00 PM

Well, you know us boys...we're slow learners