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. . . . . } } }. . . . . ~here there everywhere~ muted thoughts swallow white moon … rocks out of water canyon waves press in boomerang questions return… shivering castles until salted winds crawl on reality’s spine… ~back to rosanna~ all rights reserved © . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Contest: Michael Falotico’s “ Your Thoughts” Poet: nette onclaud

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Date: 3/14/2015 7:18:00 PM
Nette. sorry you are not able to do soupmail. it's really too bad for you. Also, I looked after my contest closed to see why you did not make my list. Always you are so impressive with your poems. When I tracked down your tanka, I saw it was the one I had disqualified because you wrote six lines, not five. Sorry you did not make it this time!
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Date: 6/20/2011 1:19:00 PM
Interesting one..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:16:00 AM
Nette,congrats on your big win.I love the way you write.best wishes!
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:49:00 PM
WEll, I see you made the list. So far I am really liking all the winners. Michael picked wisely and it would be too difficult for ME to pick among all these poems if it were my own contest! Hurrah for your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:43:00 PM
This is so cool, Nette. It has a rhythm at first which drew me in...then, catchy lil phrases that made me ponder a while. I think I like the feeling of a salted wind and a question boomer-ranging back to the poser! High 5, girl. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:20:00 PM
Excellent use of images to describe the castle, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:56:00 AM
Hi Nette congrats on your win...Enjoyed...
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:19:00 AM
oh yo congrats Nette u know how brilliant this piece is for this fantastic win in Michael's contest dear friend... a super write so brilliant too.. enjoy this win and happy too... be sharing winners list with u...oh...
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of michael, nette
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:13:00 AM
Many congrats on your super win, Nette : )
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:58:00 AM
this was great congrats on your win. cory
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:29:00 AM
a wonderf poem,, nette!!!what a great haiku, thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d.
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:49:00 AM
A gripping poem, written by a superb storyteller, fascinating and compellling~~
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:01:00 AM
Hey Nette my friend.. hope u are OK luv.. been reading many poems lying on this lovely beach .. oh the freedom ... oh the warm sunny day... oh so early in the morning here but who cares.. hope u are super ... always great to read and re read your lovely lines ..my friend...
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:18:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today Nette. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Nette : )
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:18:00 AM
Hope u had a super cool day yesterday in the luv of the special day my friend Nette ... I had such fun arriving here and still cannot sleep taking in the vast view of this lovely place ..
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:13:00 AM
Great entry dear poet ! I'm sure Micheal will be flattered with this write ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! ....much love, james
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Date: 5/8/2011 9:18:00 PM
oh, nice, how you made it personal for Michael at the end. Great imagery as usual, dear!!
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:56:00 PM
Wow ..will Michael ever luv this one Nette my friend.. great depiction of his photo..now enlarged for all to create lovely words as u have done.. good luck my friend in this contest .. a stunning synopsis of photo painted in words luv..
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:10:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Nette...best wishes...
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Date: 5/8/2011 12:50:00 PM
Hehe Nette, you will score high with this one :) especially with your last line.. Good luck for the contest ;) *hugs*
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