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Let me tell you, my beloved . . . this Valentine's Day 1. You have my heart and I have your soul. 2. You have my soul and I have your heart. 3. I love your face, your strength and power. 4. You love my rosy lips, my hair, my body, my tranquility 5. We are two hearts sighing, grasping love. 6. We are a love knot tied, that even death cannot undo. 7. When the dawn wind is low, sweet our loving. 8. When dusk falls and the nightingale complains, sweet our loving 9. When the stars are shining and twinkling, sweet our loving. 10. This love is forever and ever, to infinity and beyond. 11. A red rose bouquet I have for you this Valentines Day. 12. I lay it on your tomb, my beloved. _______________________________ February 12, 2016 Poetry/List/How Sweet Is Our Love Copyright Protected, ID 16-756-121-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. For the contest, Valentine Poem, To Your Beloved, sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron First Place

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Date: 2/16/2016 12:55:00 PM
nice win. PD
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 1:55:00 AM
Linda, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 2/16/2016 1:47:00 AM
And how very sweet is your poem Broken.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:56:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the sweet and the congrats !
Date: 2/15/2016 11:49:00 AM
Beautiful and heart-wrenching, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:59:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations ~
Date: 2/15/2016 11:09:00 AM
Wow that was a shock the ending so sad, lovely poem congrats xxx
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Date: 2/15/2016 11:12:00 AM
Wendy, thanks for the lovely and the congrats, yes it ended sad ~
Date: 2/14/2016 8:26:00 PM
Awesome! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:37:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the awesome and the congratulations, so grateful.
Date: 2/14/2016 7:21:00 PM
so beautiful and so sad. I love this, Constance.
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:38:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the beautiful and the love ~
Date: 2/14/2016 3:11:00 PM
Happy Valentines Day my dear friend :) Love your beautiful poem, congratulations on your win !!!!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 12:45:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations !!
Date: 2/14/2016 2:00:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, what a wonderful flow your list does have. What visions it does instil in the mind. May your pen ever run gold....Vlad.
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:49:00 AM
vlad, thanks for the nice comment, appreciate ..
Date: 2/14/2016 1:12:00 PM
Broken Wings, your great write has created a rhetoric suspense in my mind. The last line gave me a blow ... Truly blown away. Much love and Happy Valentines, Bobby
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 12:50:00 AM
Bobby, thanks for that beautiful comment, so grateful !
Date: 2/14/2016 12:31:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/14/2016 12:34:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the congrats, hugs back !
Date: 2/14/2016 11:53:00 AM
BW, congrats on your placement in the contest! *Smiles* -luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2016 12:20:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congratulations and the smiles !
Date: 2/14/2016 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the first placement of the contest Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2016 12:20:00 PM
Nayda, thanks for a great contest theme and for my truly wonderful placement, I am honored ~
Date: 2/13/2016 12:41:00 PM
1 Love, 2 hearts, 3 objects: mind, body and Soul....4 walls, 5 rooms, 6 reasons why a true home can never feel cold....I Love it bw....;)
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:41:00 PM
Eric, thanks for visiting with that lovely comment, appreciate !
Date: 2/13/2016 8:19:00 AM
i will look away from the sad ending, this is one love which is eternal, this is simply lovely, and i know your awesome beloved will be smiling as he saw this, do you feel the atmosphere change to cool, that's a kiss he's blown to his elegant lover, you...well penned list poem, the love's eternal, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:42:00 PM
Sage, thanks for that truly beautiful comment, you have such compassion, he is with me all the time, his wings protect me, and he is waiting above, of that I know ~
Date: 2/12/2016 7:47:00 PM
So beautiful, BW. (you should enter it into the "Entwined" contest, I know the sponsor, she'd love, LOL.)
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Date: 2/13/2016 1:16:00 AM
James, thanks for the beautiful, ah yes, the sponsor, loves it !!
Date: 2/12/2016 4:12:00 PM
So beautiful yet so sad :-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:31:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and hugs, well you know me, I have to make it sad or it would not be a broken wings poem ~

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