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How Hot Was It

~*~ ~~**~~ in the desert heat coyotes scream so wildly echo through the sage ~*~ mercury rising thermometers replace clocks the burning sky melts ~*~ sunrise to sunset blue turns pink yellow and orange colors to behold ~*~ Arizona heat a hundred ten in the shade eggs fry on sidewalks ~*~ sweats beads in seconds blister and burn in minutes my hair is on fire ~~**~~ ~*~

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Date: 7/26/2015 5:31:00 PM
This is really hot-hot-hot!! An awesome string of haiku with sun-blazing imagery! With that kind of heat, it's no wonder "in the desert, you can't remember your name":-)!It's a hot 7! Pandita
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/27/2015 12:48:00 AM
On a horse with no name Thank you so much for the blazing review Pandita It's been 110 to 113 all week
Date: 7/25/2015 4:52:00 PM
*note to self: never visit AZ in the summer. Thank you for the very creative travel tip. =)
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/26/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Preston, 110 113 all week
Date: 7/25/2015 4:34:00 PM
Gosh this imagery is sizzling in your string of haiku Baxter:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 3:49:00 PM
I'm so sorry Warner I got your name incorrect:( I do apologise:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/26/2015 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I have to admit it is easier when it'd been 110- 113 all week

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