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How Can You Trust

How can you tell if someone really cares How do you know it's the truth How can you know that it's not just a lie When they have all the words but no proof When somebody says that they care But no hint it's true is in their eyes How can you even begin to believe When all that they say seems like lies How can you trust when you've been betrayed Like when they tell you they care But then when you truly do need a friend They leave you and all go elsewhere When somebody says that they care How do you know it's the truth How can you even begin to believe When they have all the words but no proof

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Date: 10/8/2015 8:10:00 AM
Hello Warren, I am glad to help. Until you are more comfortable with which form your writting falls into just list it in a MAJOR category like VERSE. This poem IS listed correctly. Let me show you-all of the following form labels would be correct for this poem, going from the most general to the most specific -VERSE-RHYME-Quatrain [means 4 lines] Hope this is of help. Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:24:00 AM
nice one and truthful.You will know the real world when u r in problems and people who really care for you.Just trust n believe in your instincts you will know.have a great day:)
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Date: 8/19/2015 10:03:00 PM
Hi Warren, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/19/2015 4:06:00 PM
Warren, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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