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How Can I Tell You

How can I tell you that I love you, what can I do to let you know that it's true? If I gave you the stars from the sky or the moon above, would that show you true love? How about a diamond bright one that shows pure light, would that prove my love was right? Or perhaps some gold and silver will do, I would give it all to you. But all I have to offer is my heart, I feel it breaking when we're apart. So my love tell me what to do, how can I tell you that I love you? JSergi

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Date: 2/22/2015 5:52:00 PM
Hi Joseph, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/23/2015 3:33:00 PM
Thank You for your kind words ,SKAT
Date: 2/22/2015 4:27:00 PM
beautifully expressed - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/23/2015 3:33:00 PM
Jan thanks so much for your post
Date: 2/22/2015 4:04:00 PM
Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/23/2015 3:34:00 PM
No worries Nate!! Thanks
Date: 6/9/2014 5:18:00 PM
There's nothing more beautiful than the gift of love wrapped within one's heart.No diamonds can compare to it.A very romantic and sentimental poem..Charma
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 6/9/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Charma for you beautiful words. The heart knows the true meaning of love and if we hear it then we blessed.
Date: 3/4/2014 11:15:00 AM
A heart is just the start.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 3/4/2014 3:29:00 PM
So true John. Thanks for stopping by and the post.
Date: 2/24/2014 6:15:00 PM
Hi Joseph: A sincere plea to express your feelings. Good Write!
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/25/2014 3:20:00 PM
Thanks for the post "Ralph" and for stopping by
Date: 2/22/2014 11:00:00 AM
This is very beautiful. The most precious thing you have is your heart. Be careful who you give it to. Remember that real love works both ways. If it don't it's not true love.... Lucilla
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/22/2014 11:25:00 AM
So true Lucilla but have no fear for my heart is in very good hands! Thanks for the post and for stopping by!
Date: 2/22/2014 7:58:00 AM
Love needs, in addition to words and gifts, actions of caring and concern! You see my friend Joseph, a gram of appropriate action rates more than a tone of words! Beautiful poem, sensitive , tender and romantic!
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/22/2014 8:52:00 AM
Demetrios my friend you are so right. I thank you for you words of wisdom and for stopping by.
Date: 2/16/2014 9:44:00 PM
Joseph...heartfelt, melodious! Nice! Jimbo
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/17/2014 3:22:00 PM
Jimbo thanks for the post and for stopping by.
Date: 2/15/2014 9:30:00 PM
Joseph, touching words and emotions to express. You paint a very deep pain, it's not an easy thing to say, when all is running out.... Enjoyed.. Linda
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/16/2014 7:20:00 AM
Linda thanks so much for stopping by and for your words of truth.
Date: 2/15/2014 6:57:00 PM
Joseph that is one hell of a beautiful poem, absolutely loved it. Vera
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/15/2014 7:47:00 PM
Vera thanks very much for the post and stopping by.
Date: 2/15/2014 12:54:00 PM
- What is the joy with money or gold ..... and no one real love - Your heart is worth more than anything else - Beautiful Joseph!! - Have a nice weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/15/2014 3:20:00 PM
With love in our life we are rich! Thank you Anne Lise for your kind words and for stopping by.
Date: 2/15/2014 12:42:00 PM
I don't think you can do much more than this poem. Very well expressed love poem.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/15/2014 3:21:00 PM
High Praise comming from you Richard thank you so much for your post.

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