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Hour Glass

Time The sands of time pass swiftly flowing through the hour glass Will this day be the last for Time is running Time is running Time is running Time is running time is run time is ru time is r time is time i time tim ti t t ti tim time time is time is g time is go time is gone time is almost time is almost gone who knows the day or hour who knows the day or hour who knows the day or hour

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/2/2014 11:38:00 AM

WOW! This is just so beautiful and creative! I love it!!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2009 6:37:00 AM

so creative..it's a SHAPE verse becuase its about time..not about the hour glass..I DO love its shape! Light & Love

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/17/2009 9:30:00 AM

Dear Sara, very well done It's hard to do concrete Poems I also have a concrete HOUR Glass Poem "Our Glass Hour Glass" YOU are a very Inspiring POETESS ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/16/2009 12:24:00 PM

Very creative, good job on the picture and poem...thanks on The Mule...I have gone 60 years without riding one, think that it is the way it will stay...llol......Danny

James Fraser

Date: 10/16/2009 11:29:00 AM

Excellent picture attempt Sara, must try one, one of these days >> James

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/16/2009 11:22:00 AM

I am no good at picture poems, so I applaud for your perseverance and your ingenuity. Kudos, my dear. Thank you for your kind remarks. Sorry for the lag, but I was moving all last monthg into this from New Jersey to North Carolina and it has taken that long to get up and running. Regards, Gerard.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 7:38:00 AM

Wonderful Concrete, Sara! A creative display with a powerful message! Excellent work! Love, Robin