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Hot Sultry Summer Air

Hot sultry summer air. Clouds gather filled with rain, float by leave water rare. All wait relief from pain. Clouds gather filled with rain, leaving a small sprinkle, while all plants wait relief from pain. Frogs hear thunder for miles. Leaving a small sprinkle while, crickets, birds, bees with all frogs hear thunder for miles. Sunflowers enjoy; grow tall. Crickets, birds, bees with all, float by leave water rare. Sunflowers enjoy; grow tall, Hot sultry summer air. Contest: Pantoum Sponsor: Paula Swanson

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Date: 7/29/2011 10:02:00 AM
I can almost touch the expectancy in this sara, enjoyed your words today..
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:57:00 AM
Ah, to hav e rain, how badly we need it. Wonderful verse.
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Date: 7/23/2011 11:56:00 AM
nicely done, with a not so easy form. good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:21:00 AM
Fabulous use of the pantoum form to describe the sights and sounds of summer, Sara. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/22/2011 5:43:00 AM
This is very well done. Beautiful conveyance of nature. Good luck
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Date: 7/22/2011 2:13:00 AM
Sara this is beautifully done ... good luck in the comp ! I love the atmosphere you have created well done love Jayne
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Date: 7/21/2011 12:44:00 PM
perfect depiction of this horrific heat wave burning up the land and affecting animals and fowl .. excellent for the contest.. full of real expressions... good luck .. so happy to see u got your gold star back again.. bravo...
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:54:00 AM
your lines flow like a stream with such a serene tone to them, sara,, i am bewitched; lovely!!... winning streaks to you; my bet, of course! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:39:00 AM
You did a good job with a Pantoum. It was a pleasant read and flowed well. Good luck in the contest. JancarlC.
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