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Hot Spot

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Hot Spot

Monsoon yet come soon
Sweat, sweat, sweat, melt till get wet
Stifling in rhyming

                                                      3rd place
                                       Contest Judged:  11/23/2012
                                    Sponsored by: Charles Henderson

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Yanny. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:42:00 AM
    I love how you related the monsoon to writing. Awesome last line! congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 5:50:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your win Yanny, hugs xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:16:00 PM
    Yanny, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 11:37:00 AM
    Well written Haiku, Yanny ! Wishing you a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)