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Hoping For Sunshine

When the stormy sea crashes like thunder upon your wind tossed vessel and lightning rips the dark sky all you hope for is sunshine As the storm subsides and the sky returns to blue your hope will shine through the sun will shine much brighter As a rainbow paints the sky 10-16-2012......................................(1)

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Date: 11/5/2012 11:39:00 AM
A perfect read for the day, we had several days of rain but the sunshine is shining as brightly as this poem today.
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:33:00 PM
Joseph..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 2:59:00 PM
Congrats for your win with this very lovely tanka set!
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Date: 10/29/2012 11:18:00 AM
CONGRATS JOSEPH ON A REMARKABLE WRITE AND WELL DESERVED WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/29/2012 9:58:00 AM
Big congratulations on you win Joseph, I like this one xx
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:09:00 AM
Nice use of emotion ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2012 8:25:00 AM
thank you Debbie
Date: 10/29/2012 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2012 7:04:00 AM
thank ypu Carol
Date: 10/29/2012 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2012 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for the win Leonora....May the sun shine always in your life too...love
Date: 10/24/2012 2:43:00 PM
these are so good Joseph, if for the contest, good luck...
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2012 7:01:00 AM
thanks Harry
Date: 10/21/2012 11:57:00 AM
A very soothing read. Tremendous descriptive qualities... loved the images in the last stanza.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2012 7:00:00 AM
thanks Carol
Date: 10/19/2012 9:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Those storms of life can get very scary sometimes..Great encouraging work that you have penned ...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2012 7:00:00 AM
thank you Sara
Date: 10/18/2012 2:28:00 PM
a pretty one that shines with hope.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2012 7:00:00 AM
thanks Andrea
Date: 10/16/2012 7:14:00 PM
and with that sunshine would come a pretty rainbow...nice images...good write, i enjoyed your tanka :)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/16/2012 8:18:00 PM
thank you Sandra....i like that idea...its a great one...

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