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Hope's Waning

YDaydreaming of falling in love, you think about it all of time. And find yourself wishing for wings to escape anxiety's climb. In this state of unhappiness, you seek what you never possessed. And anger fuels depression, leaving you feeling tired and stressed. Innocent fantasies flourish, played out within romantic dreams. And passion's flame burns in your heart, muting the sound of silent screams. Magic still exists in your world, although reality's gaining. For it is hard to stay smiling when time's ticking and hope's waning. (Quatrain) 6/4/2015

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Date: 3/4/2018 10:31:00 PM
I enjoyed how you built this poem up. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support and encouragement my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/8/2015 1:06:00 AM
Emile each lines groans with much intensity.. i like the first stanza best.. awesome..=') ~olive eloisa
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Olive, for all your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 6/5/2015 2:28:00 PM
you create a feeling we all embrace with lines so languidly expressed... how delicate and profound, emile.. huggs
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Date: 6/5/2015 4:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, your words have touched my heart. Emile.
Date: 6/4/2015 3:08:00 PM
Emile, oh your poem is beautifully penned with amazing words and phrases and I am giving it a 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, after all these years
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Date: 6/4/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings, for all your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 6/4/2015 8:32:00 AM
I like this even though quite a sad picture it paints. I think the 'within this state of emptiness, you miss what you never possessed' is very powerful as is the last 2 lines. Kind Rgds Laura
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/4/2015 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Laura, for your encouragement and support. Emile.

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