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Hopelessly Opened

My face is unveiled to you My heart is exposed to you My emotion is without protection You know me I never put on a mask when I am with you I put down all my barriers for you You know me You know my likes and dislikes You know my soul desires None of my frames are hidden You know me Oh gosh! I have allowed you to infiltrate my person Now, that you have infiltrated my person Please don’t leave me alone on this path

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Sonia Walker

Date: 4/10/2016 9:03:00 AM

As humans, we are vulnerable. Your lovely poem expresses what many of us feel along the journey of life. All the best with your creative writing. ~ Sonia

Joanna Charlery
Date: 4/12/2016 8:19:00 PM

Thank you, Sonia! You truly captured the essence of my creative writing.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 12:30:00 AM

Joanna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Joanna Charlery
Date: 4/12/2016 8:36:00 PM

Thanks Linda! I am new to the art of poetry. I have poetry as part of my BA English Literature. However, I welcome your feedback or comments on any of my creative writing.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 12:25:00 AM

Joanna, you sure poured your heart into this write... nicely penned. Linda

Joanna Charlery
Date: 4/12/2016 8:55:00 PM

Linda, yes.. you understand the deep of this art piece. Thanks!