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Hopeless Fate

Depression extreme I feel only darkness near I’m suffocated By sadness, the trials within Holds me with a hopeless fate Russell Sivey Entrant into Poet ~ Destroyer's "Tanka "me" a sad song" contest 10/6/2012

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2012 9:07:00 AM

My hearty congratulations on your win, Russell! hugs:)Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2012 3:46:00 PM

congratulations, Russell, with your win in PD's sad tanka contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2012 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Russell. Love, Carol XXXX

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/22/2012 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your smashing win Russell xx

Tanya Harrington

Date: 10/22/2012 10:39:00 AM

A well done tale of true sadness--a hopeless fate--powerfully expressed. Love it. Congratulations Russell. :) Tanya

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/22/2012 9:33:00 AM

beautifully sad poem friend Russell. congratulations on your win!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/22/2012 7:16:00 AM

congrats on your win russell! I can feel the hopelessness...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2012 3:55:00 PM

CONGRATS RUSSELL LUV ON A DYNAMIC WRITE AND TOP OF THE CHARTS WIN MY FRIEND ..

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/21/2012 1:55:00 PM

sad indeed, congrats on your win Russell

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/21/2012 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in PD's contest. i wish for your life more sunlight.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 11:49:00 AM

Russell,, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/8/2012 5:49:00 AM

Love how you bring the sadness across in this write Russell, enjoyed

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/6/2012 7:11:00 AM

great write for the contest,best of luck Russell,very sad song

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 7:07:00 AM

This may seem like a "mutual admiration society" but this is a great entry into her contest! Good luck my good friend!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/6/2012 6:18:00 AM

DYNAMIC WORDS RUSSELL MY FRIEND .. EXTREME EMOTION EMITS WITH SADNESS AND IMAGERY .. WINNING WISHES FOR PD AND CONGRATS ON YOUR MANY WINS LUV .. I HAVE BEEN TRYING TO READ YOUR POETRY FOR 3 DAYS NOW BUT EACH TIME I CLICKED ON ANY OF THE NEW WRITES .. A BLANK SCREEN APPREARED TO MY FRUSTRATION.. I HOPE ALL IS RESOLVED NOW .. WERE U EXPERIENCING ANY ISSUES TRYING TO COMMENT? I AM SO UPSET I MISSED SO MANY OF YOUR AMAZING WRITES LUV ..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/6/2012 2:48:00 AM

sublime in language and feel, russell... i haven't seen this new contest yet... this will surely be on the list; so well expressed, especially "the trials within holds me with a hopeless fate.." clappies!..:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/5/2012 10:55:00 PM

Looks good Russell.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2012 10:28:00 PM

oh so there is yet another tanka contest. Oh my , and here I am with no more time left tonight for more comments. Good luck with your tanka in the contest, my friend.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2012 10:23:00 PM

Russell, stopping by to take a peek and say good night before I log off... Good night.. and thank you..pd