Hope

Belief of gaining Hunger of knowing Lost in defense But never lost in hoping Check the diary of hope The past give me hope The past is part of my future Losing is in nature But hoping is in my soul Serve your rights Stay in good thoughts Live with a positive aim

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Lara Wash

Date: 7/16/2016 7:37:00 PM

Hi Kanyile Surbuzer, I was introduced to hope when I was a child and it's been one of my closest friends ever since and living with a positive aim is more than mere words it rest in hope. Nice,nice poem. Welcome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:33:00 AM

KANYILE SURBUZER, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2016 10:22:00 PM

Kanyile, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Vasudevan Desikachari

Date: 7/13/2016 8:30:00 PM

if this is your first piece of contribution well it is indeed very good. Keep writing with the same spirit.Good luck.

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/13/2016 7:02:00 AM

Hope for the best Kan:)