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Honey My Love

Honey my love with your golden hair The north westerly cold wind has blown Wait our romantic hideaway to share When we will be cozy warm in our zone The north westerly cold wild wind has blown Bringing gray clouds covering sun_ not trapped When we will be cozy warm in our zone With you love by the fire close_ blanket wrapped Bring on gray clouds covering sun_not trapped Snuggle in_love hot chocolate _desire With you love by the fire close_blanket wrapped For when with you love will be our attire Snuggle in_love hot chocolate_desire Age knows no bounds when love's around For when with you; love will be our attire Even though with gray hair my love is crowned Age knows no bounds when love's around Wait our romantic hideaway to share Even though with gray hair my love is crowned Honey my love with your golden hair Written by: Sara Kendrick November 30, 2010 ( This work has two voices or two people speaking..)

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Date: 12/29/2010 9:28:00 PM
Its got kind of a Royal Stateliness to it combined with a casual california feel to it. Liked it alot
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Date: 12/14/2010 12:44:00 AM
Many congrats Sara on winning coveted HM in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 10:54:00 PM
Sara, this is a lovely poem, I read and see among the well deserved winners in Paula's Pantoum contest. Growing old with someone you love will take you back always in your youngster years. Congratulations on your winning. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:51:00 PM
A terrific poem full with lovely images. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/12/2010 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM in the contest, Sara! Enjoy! Hope you're doing well, Sara. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/12/2010 11:56:00 AM
Yeah!
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:43:00 AM
I love this poem, Sara. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Paula's Pantoum Contest with this vibrant write and win .. my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Sara
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Date: 12/8/2010 11:16:00 AM
Love vibrates from this one Sara. So completely romantic with great imagery. Love it! Lay
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:48:00 PM
beautifully expressed
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Date: 12/4/2010 2:57:00 PM
You are a genius, Sara. Great write! Thanks, appreciate your comment. Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 12/3/2010 12:59:00 PM
Wrote with so much love in your heart Sara.Thank you for your wonderful comment.Happy holiday to you and yours.tERESA
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Date: 12/3/2010 11:14:00 AM
Sweet and light poem. Made me feel romantic too. cheers suresh
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Date: 12/3/2010 2:47:00 AM
A sweet poem, Sarah...enjoyed the read:) Hugs, Emilia
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:16:00 PM
Love that line about HOney, with your golden hair. A very snuggly feeling poem. Cute!
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:49:00 PM
Lovely Sara, excellent pantoum, the form repetition goes well with love thrall, glad to hear you're encouraged:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 12:24:00 PM
Soup Mail Sara...
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Date: 12/2/2010 10:59:00 AM
Hello Sara, I really enjoyed reading this today. Made me smile. Thank you for looking in on me. I appreciate all of your kind comments. As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:28:00 PM
Interesting way you have arranged you rhymes Sara. It has a very neat effect. Thanks for comments. Yes, Mrs. Claus has been sort of out of it for a number of years, because of Mr. Claus's flaws! Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2010 1:56:00 PM
I love this Sara... every word warms my eyes and soul...with love Michael
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:55:00 PM
wonderfully expressed, sara... well-knitted in imagery and form.. best of luck in the contest, a strong contender! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/1/2010 10:54:00 AM
A TRULY WORTHY POEM ON LOVE MATTERS. WELL WRITTEN AND I ENJOYED IT. PLS READ MY NEW POEM "THINGS FALL APART" THANXX FOR YOUR SWEET COMMENTS ON MY POEMS. LOVE, LIGHTENING INK.
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Date: 12/1/2010 7:45:00 AM
sounds naughty...;0
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