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You passed me bye today No time, no change, no care With shield in place You looked past my face And pretended I wasn’t there You passed me bye today So intent to avoid delay Your life must be fine And so once was mine Pray to God You will never be here You passed me bye today Because in your heart you say Someone else here will care But the truth is that’s rare Soon I’ll die And be out of your way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/6/2014 6:30:00 AM
Beautiful Douglas and both Collaboration: Let's try "Life"... You write the first verse I will go from yours... We will do three a piece to make six verses with four to five lines... Free Verse or Verse or Dramatic Verse is fine... You can write all three and I can integrate or we can do the verses one at time so that we write from each other thoughts... Game... :) Verlena
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Douglas Dicketts
Date: 3/6/2014 7:59:00 AM
What I sent was written as three lines, but it might work better as one. Use it as you like.

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