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Note the sighing of day's retreat, color the grey blackness of night. Drunken thievery, my feat Of gleaming lights, beckoning frights- to begin to stir in this sea of a waning tumultuous falling. Baptized with his promise to me survival his only calling- no white bursting of the stars, in this sea of a fading fading grasp; no redeeming god, no ark- messed up with each other perhaps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/23/2012 6:41:00 PM
excellent poem! redeeming? warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:22:00 PM
JENNIFER, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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Date: 3/7/2011 9:46:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:19:00 PM
Nice piece Jenifer! Welcome to PoetrySoup dear. Please keep your creative caps on, let your passionate pen paint purposeful pages with poetic pride. Enjoy the great company of poetry people here. Love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:15:00 PM
This is actually a rhyming poem and beautiful expressions with enforced rhyming. I see a good poet in you, jennifer
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Date: 3/5/2011 2:25:00 PM
Brilliant placement of rime, with a tinge of retreating day, brings it pretty.
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Book: Shattered Sighs