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Homelessness causes my mind to wander Obviously to the times with no friends Mama lying face down on the floor Either in a stupor or from exhaustion She had six different looking kids With a daddy who never came home Evidently, she was not married Escaping from truth with anxious lies There were times when we didn't eat Had no bread and no one to help out Occasions were only for other kids Me and my sisters and brothers left Eager to go in search of a new life 2/3/16

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Date: 2/7/2016 2:00:00 PM
A 7 for sure on this sad, descriptive poem! Janice
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/7/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank You Janice! As soon as the Super Bowl crowd leaves hope to read much of your poetry!
Date: 2/4/2016 1:32:00 PM
woe is me.. these cute kids need a sweet home... so superbly quilled, judy... i counsel orphans and this made me teary-eyed... yes to this!.. huggs
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/4/2016 3:25:00 PM
You are a Soldier of God caring for the such needy people whether old or young. You were hand picked to bring happiness and they are most fortunate to have Nette' on their side..Bless You
Date: 2/4/2016 10:37:00 AM
So sad, but so brilliantly written, Judy. You mastered such a wonderful flow of words within your Acrostic! All the best for the contest. Hugs, 7, Sandra
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/4/2016 11:01:00 AM
Sandra taking a step back in time...I missed you when you were gone...Hate to keep harping..but so very glad you are back...Thanks for stopping...appreciate it...
Date: 2/3/2016 3:00:00 PM
Very different and I'm sure the plight of so many little ones. A great write. BG
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/3/2016 3:42:00 PM
good to hear from you Barbara....thanks for your comment...
Date: 2/3/2016 1:51:00 PM
some home life is never sweet Judy - I love your take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/3/2016 3:43:00 PM
You're right....dirt poor doesn't even apply....thanks....

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