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Home Sweet Home

Easy are the paths to follow when I'm young and fancy free, home is comfort, joy, a blessing, caring folks and constancy. My borders are the playroom, garden, narrow spaces, fledgling child, questions answered with a bear hug, nothing crazy, nothing wild. Later, as my frontiers widen, gone the band aid to placate, in the cauldron of confusion, far beyond the garden gate. Childhood greeting, pale and fleeting, life no longer black and white, paths collide and intermingle, as I ponder dark and light. Walking through the forest blindly, Hansel with no Gretel near, breadcrumbs are a cruel delusion, still my courage, stoke my fear. Faith and pride and resolution drive my journey on, because, though I've traveled many pathways, home is where it always was.

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Date: 12/27/2015 12:43:00 PM
This is a magnificent poem my dear , a spectacular piece of work , very touchy and great it's just simply beautiful...Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :)
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/27/2015 12:47:00 PM
You are most kind my dear! Your delightful remarks are much appreciated... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/25/2015 6:08:00 PM
Nice verse Keith, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/25/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thanks Linda! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/23/2015 5:23:00 PM
Great write and very fitting for Christmas I might add!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/23/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Arthur! Your kind remarks are greatly appreciated! Keith
Date: 12/23/2015 10:42:00 AM
As always, you touched my very soul with your magnificent writing. Thank you! Elaine
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/23/2015 10:52:00 AM
God bless you my dear! and thank you for such a heartwarming review. Keith
Date: 12/23/2015 9:43:00 AM
When I first saw your title, my mind raced with thought of Hansel and Gretel...you wove them in just right, Keith.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/23/2015 9:59:00 AM
Thanks so much for your delightful review! I am most grateful, Best wishes, Keith

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