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Holy Cadoodle

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Holy Cadoodle



Had a wild dream just the other night Was a ruler of a distant planet With forty-two slave girls to do my bidding All gorgeous with naughty habits Customs were quite a bit different to ours But one thing remained the same They liked to snuggle and do naughty things To say no, would have been insane So I suffered through this difficult ordeal And satisfied as many as I could I was plain tuckered out after twenty-eight Apologized then collapsed where I stood Woo Hooo! What an amazing reverie I'll try to dream it again tonight Some of those girls had real strange customs Holy cadoodle, talk about excite! <3 <3 <3 © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 11:34:00 AM
    Well...maybe the rest got their turn the next go round..you're a hoot! :-) :-) :-) :-)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/20/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes... I promised them! They're getting edgy, they can;t wait! LOL Love from hooty Jack xoxoxox
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 9:26:00 AM
    Well well....wonder how long a shower you needed after that one!!! That's it Jack; I'm sending C a harness for you...and yes I know how many different responses you could have to that one but try and keep the one you choose CLEAN! lol ....by the way, if you got through 28, then the FIRST one didn't do something right ;)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/18/2013 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Jack!!
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/16/2013 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    CLEAN??? No guarantees! I'm naughty to the core! You're right, the first one was just so-so but the next 27!!!!! WOO HOOOOOOOOOO! What a way to die!!! XOXOXOXOX
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 2:46:00 AM
    Loads of fun, yeah? :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/16/2013 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Silly me eh!!! Just having so fun... happy you enjoyed it dear friend!!! Big big hugs, Jack XOXOXOX
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Yup yup one can dream!! Happy Holidays Light & Love

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/15/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WHATTA DREAM! LOL Best wishes for the holiday season, Miss Debbie! LOve and hugs XOXOXOX
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Sounds like you were sultan in a harem, Kenny!!!!! Now....don't be naughty, you know so many women will tire you out and that isn't good for your health!!! ;) DO NOT RELIVE THE DREAM!!! I'm worried!!! ONE Feisty woman can be trouble, 28???? Dear dear....;) Betty Boop says....BE GOOD KENNY BOY!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/15/2013 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Whatta way to go eh!!! LOL Thank you for your concern dear Eileen but this guy's going to be around for a while yet! Big huggeroonies Miss Boop... love Kenneth! XOXOX
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:01:00 AM
    "Things are always different and changing... The Live Nativity has gone from quiet and relevent to a full blown production! Dragon had the it declared a collection site for the 'Toys for Tots Foundation'. He has his penguins running around the crowds collecting the toys... And he has the Muscular Dystrophy Child spokesperson... playing baby Jesus... Yes! I didn't forget Dragon!... He's now narrating the entire event! And to make it cooler... He gave the Penguins tennis shoes to match his own!"

    Eastman Avatar Carol Eastman
    Date: 12/15/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    We nixed the Penguin dancing in skimpy outfits! Bad Dragon! Bad Dragon! You should be more careful what you suggest... Poor Wee Dragon is So impressionable... LOL.
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/15/2013 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOWSERS!!! That mind of yours... LOL XOXOXOXOX
    Eastman Avatar Carol Eastman
    Date: 12/15/2013 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    PS. Don't give Dragon any more ideas... After collecting the toys... He now wants the penguins to dress up as harem and slave girls... to be set free... You should see their skimpy outfits! GROAN!
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 6:39:00 AM
    Ha Ha LOL, this is a terrific and entertaining write about your fantastic dream you had! Maybe I will dream about that tonight...or better yet, I'll dream about my wife!! I know, I'm old fashioned, but that is just the way I am, I love my wife so much that I even want her in my dreams, though I do have to say that 28 beautiful women is awfully appealing! Am glad you enjoyed your dream though my friend, that is awesome! I hope you get to enjoy your next dream just as much! Excellent Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/15/2013 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Just a dream dear friend! I, too, love my wife dearly but 28 beautiful women... ??? LOL