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Hollys' Dawn

==================== at dawn, a secret Shadow tries to catch a glint of Sea's surprise when Daybreak sheds her dim disguise and silent, signals Sun to rise then arctic moods and murky eyes glow warm, grow light as Morning ties her silken, silver Water prize with strands of sand to gentle Skies... ====================

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/28/2017 7:34:00 AM

So beautiful, Lycia!

Lycia Harding
Date: 6/6/2017 9:37:00 AM

PS - I like your hair, it's cute!

Lycia Harding
Date: 5/28/2017 9:28:00 AM

Hi Kimmie, thank you! xoxo

Brian Davey

Date: 5/28/2017 5:12:00 AM

This is one great metaphorical write! Congrats on your placement

Lycia Harding
Date: 5/28/2017 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Brian! xoxo

Ironic Zink

Date: 5/28/2017 2:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Lycia Harding
Date: 5/28/2017 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, ZiNK - fun contest!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2015 2:46:00 PM

Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

Lycia Harding
Date: 8/13/2015 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! xoxo

Skat A

Date: 8/10/2015 6:33:00 PM

Hi Lycia, I like this one... The Arctic mood...ooo seems so cold... WOW, this needs to be on the top.... :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Lycia Harding
Date: 8/10/2015 7:03:00 PM

Oooh, so chilly....brrrr! Ha! Thank you, SKAT. xoxo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/10/2015 1:57:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Lycia! Great work!

Lycia Harding
Date: 8/10/2015 5:50:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Sharma and congrats to you on your recent winning streak. You're really kickin' a$$! Oops - I mean... doing WELL. Heh heh. Keep up the great work! xoxo

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2015 5:59:00 AM

a delightful poem Lycia congrats on win hugs

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/27/2015 2:42:00 PM

Thank you, Shad! xoxo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 2:30:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Lycia! Brilliant work!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/27/2015 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Sharma! Congrats on your frequent and well deserved wins lately, too. I'll stop by and rate them all when I get a chance. xoxo

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 4:51:00 PM

the flow and imagery are delightful Lycia - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx 7

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/27/2015 10:11:00 AM

Hi Jan! Thank you so much. xoxoxo

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 4:33:00 PM

Lycia, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/27/2015 10:10:00 AM

Thank you, SKAT. Hmm... "SKAT". That's a pretty easy word to rhyme, isn't it? And you've been so attentive and supportive lately. Yeah. I think I feel my next tribute limerick comin' on...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2015 3:49:00 PM

this is nice, but it's not free verse. You should put it as rhyme! even better, it is monorhyme!!

Lycia Harding
Date: 5/26/2015 6:08:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I just wasn't sure and that sounded like a catch all. I've changed it now but thanks for the advice and keep those helpful hints a comin'!