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As another round of Holiday compulsion winds down and more and more stuff-junkies rev up their engines for “After Christmas” sales, some of us are once again reminded the eventual end game is most likely a dark one.

Holiday Dangers by Odin Roark ‘Tis greater to give than receive, Begging the question: “Of what?” Stuff remains the easy answer, Cloaked in its brightly colored paper and ribbons, Urging “Oohs and Ahs” from receivers, Few can resist . But what of a kind gesture in place of goods, The finding of compassion and sympathy for the truly less fortunate, Exercising that ephemeral spark of humanity once primary, But now rapidly becoming an endangered principal of our species. Hope hangs on… The aware heart knows, Like much of nature, Humanoids can’t last forever, That gathering of a materialistic image, Buttressing the seductive illusions of generosity, Be they religious or secular, Knows only an all-consuming downward spiral, A self-destructive glitter that blinds As it drills deeper into itself, Disintegrating at the end Into the loss of “caring” Fate’s delivery to a wide-awake darkness. How habitual these temporal leanings, How belittling to what innate mankind once wished to be.

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Date: 12/25/2014 8:54:00 AM
Very interesting write, Merry Christmas, Odin
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