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Hold My Hand

emotions begin to play within one's body sparkling in the fountains of life power to generate such a soft feeling within the soul you raise me up in a beautiful wave galloping unfurling rolling it in front of you the carpet red in passion flows upon an ocean blue deep i offer to you a ship to set sail heading the distance paradise island wildest dreams please jump aboard my love firstly take a sip from one of the finest of wines let the journey begin if only i could take you in a circle around the world docked underneath a coconut tree just to hold your hand in the sweetest of dreams touching fingers feelings petal soft to look into those eyes melting upon the embers moves emotions within my soul you dance with butterflies one can see an ocean swelling bursting forth with me dropping plus you head over heels hand in hand we will walk the path to paradise

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Date: 9/20/2013 10:36:00 AM
...yah...let the journey begin...here we go!...nice one...pow and thumbs.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2013 7:13:00 PM
THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENT COLLETTE DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/20/2013 9:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful write Liam..! You have written this with so much feelings. ..hope u achieve everything in life...cheers!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2013 7:12:00 PM
THANK YOU DEARLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/20/2013 5:49:00 AM
Hey Liam, Wonderful write from you my friend.. Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2013 5:49:00 AM
THANK YOU MY DEAR FRIEND HAVE A BEAUTY OF A DAY KEN DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/20/2013 2:08:00 AM
to look into those eyes melting upon the embers within my soul..How passionate such verse mingles in this paradiso created by your fingertips..Wow
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2013 11:05:00 AM
charmaine thank you my dearest friend a very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated

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