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Hold Me Under

Rough skin, hot touch. 
Smells, sounds, and the rush.
Blue eyes, freckled skin.
My curly hair and your dimpled grin.
Deep sighs, and our sweaty bodies.
I'm hot, out and in- you're all I've got.
I'm nothing, but still I'm something to you.
You ______ me over, while your feelings grew.
I regret nothing, but need you boy.
I hate you, and I love you- you treat me like a toy.
Nails dug deep, moans quietly growing louder.
The fire you set to my body is your only power.
I've lost myself in this, 
all I've got is everything you have, here's a kiss.
I can't help but wonder,
let me go or hold me under.

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  1. Date: 8/2/2011 12:49:00 AM
    ohhh, a burst of passion;s song, olive... i like! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 12:44:00 AM
    Thank you.(:

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 9:55:00 AM
    This write of yours dear poet, it has passion, and fire. The passion in your write...he better not let you go ! *smiles* Great expressive poetry Olivia ! Have a beautiful week, much love, james