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His Refuge

Beset by bitter guilt, he treads the street. From cheerless eyes spring teardrops he can’t quell. His head is lowered should by chance he meet a glance from one who knows his guise too well. He can’t escape his ever-present shame. It’s risen in him, like the moon this night, and so he pumps his arms and runs. . . aflame with pain. He loathes himself, and that’s his plight. The masses fall behind him now. The beach has summoned him, and in the sky a storm of oscillating wings appears. . .the screech of thousands clears his mind. Grey bodies swarm around him. He is found! His spirit lulls. His refuge is the city of the gulls. December 27, 2015 For the Deep and Dark Poetry Contest of Broken Wings

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Date: 1/15/2016 10:10:00 PM
WELL DONE.... AWESOME WIN.....LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2016 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:31:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/8/2016 3:47:00 AM
This sounds like Twilight Zone material.. very well done, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:33:00 PM
Andrea, a7 and a congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:29:00 PM
Imagery was exceptional Andrea congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:56:00 PM
I fell chilled at the imagery Andrea congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:54:00 AM
Darkness with this wonderful descriptive sonnet.
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:44:00 AM
Incredible imagery Andrea, left me wanting more. So many unanswered questions.
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Date: 12/28/2015 6:07:00 AM
Wow!!!! What an image you create here with this sonnet, Andrea. I am dropping in to wish you all the best in the New Year. Keep that creative genius of yours flowing. Your friend in poetry. Elaine
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Date: 12/27/2015 5:18:00 PM
Interesting work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..City of the gulls in some cities is the dump..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2015 4:45:00 PM
OH....wonder so much about the details that have brought him to this place. That's what good poetry is all about. Good work on enjambment. Still can't get the hang of it. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:17:00 PM
you leave much for me to interpret this somber work, andie... awesome , dreary one!.. huggs
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Date: 12/27/2015 12:08:00 PM
Wo! I kin hear them screechin hundreds o' gulls. You have identified hell. Love, daver
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Date: 12/27/2015 11:53:00 AM
I like the mystery and one can easily put themselves in his shoes. Well done.
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Date: 12/27/2015 10:52:00 AM
Beautifully pictured my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always,bl
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Date: 12/27/2015 10:41:00 AM
Love your poem!
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