His Prize

Irish Settler, watchting by lake shore, as a lonely hawk circles, around the blue velvet sky, serveral times, then flies off into the horizon, then she beckons to her master as she swims out to retrieve his prize. Written 6-1-11

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/15/2011 7:15:00 AM

you create a vivid scene in just a few words. just wondering, is there a reason you separated the lines this way? - curious.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/12/2011 10:50:00 AM

Lovely imagery, James. Hope you, your family and, of course, Brendon had a lovely time at his party : )

Jeff Morehead

Date: 6/9/2011 1:05:00 PM

good write James, as alway.... thanks for commenting on my last write, though it was simply fictional. Jeff

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/7/2011 5:00:00 AM

Ya just gotta love these Irish Setters. Also love Golden retrievers, James. beautiful dogs and so faithful.