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His Love Gale

Do you know what brought the wind into the world my Love... the wind is the speeding breath of God's heart the very air of his soul that carries the desire of creation through the universe to your lips seeking expression in the fire of your freedom, he wants to find his Goddess the part of himself that he lost to the sea of chaos when life insisted that independence would lead to grace, God has been looking for his Queen for longer than the stars have cried behind the blue of day, he knows that she is alive somewhere preparing her body for his solar entry and providing asylum for the passion of their poetry believing that he can reach her through the distance and sadness - J.A.B.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/9/2017 1:05:00 PM

A very beautiful written poem, although i do enjoyed the poem but the god is alone, thw only of zhis kind, he doean t requires love He is vull of it, He s the only of His kind however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/9/2017 6:34:00 PM

That's exactly why He is seeking His Queen Faraz...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/13/2016 3:29:00 PM

God is love ..He gives love...He wants love...God is indeed a passionate God,a jealous lover indeed..May her body be his temple..and her soul and heart his sweet breath...Loved where you took me with this beauty ..Creative mind you have.

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/13/2016 6:52:00 PM

Your temple is beautiful and tender, your soul a place of rare heat and poetry my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/14/2016 2:27:00 AM

What an unusual (and captivating) take on God ... the wind ... and love in general. "The part of himself that he lost to the sea of chaos when life insisted that independence would lead to grace" ... a loaded passage. Freedom lends itself to grace and forgiveness ... but with slavery there can be neither, for we had no choice. Your paradox is really intriguing at the end. Is love more precious when unattainable? Or is God transmitting his love through time and space, against all odds?

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/14/2016 6:54:00 PM

The desire of love is pure in God...slavery is the breath of freedom, and in love, liberty never cuts loose the heart anchor. I admire your intelligence my friend, I am very fortunate to know people with minds such as your Timothy...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 3/8/2016 2:09:00 PM

Great write my dear , beautiful words and great thoughts , hugs / / :) dalia

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/9/2016 1:24:00 AM

Thoughts of longing in the winds of love my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/3/2016 11:57:00 PM

He knows that she is alive somewhere...preparing her body for his solar entry...and to the final line! Exquisite in beauty and depth of thought. A different look at passion...a satisfying one.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/5/2016 6:40:00 PM

The line you quote is very sensitive, in that it acknowledges her innate, and conscious knowledge of his love, also a beautiful anticipation that she feels on the very body of her soul, consequently validating the love that lifts the breath of his heart Eileen...J.A.B.

Constance La France

Date: 3/3/2016 10:56:00 AM

Justin, this is B E A U T I F U L !! and I am loving it 7 ~

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/3/2016 6:31:00 PM

Your heart harbors a very special hope Wings of Fire, a hope that the treasure of your passion will be discovered, protected and enlivened by a love that exists just for you, this poem speaks of such things...J.A.B.

Brian Davey

Date: 3/2/2016 8:56:00 AM

very nice I enjoyed The Almighty having a little lust for once!

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/3/2016 2:12:00 AM

Indeed Brian, the laws of love encircle the Almighty's heart...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/2/2016 3:11:00 AM

What a mesmerizing beauty this one is, Justin. I feel the warm, long loving gust of the wind, God's sweet breath. The concept of God searching for his Goddess is beautiful, unique-- and the lines, "he knows that she is alive somewhere, preparing her body for his solar entry"..stick out to me, and strike a chord in me personally...his faith is strong, as well as his love, so the reader knows he will reach his Goddess in time with those truthful winds, no matter the distance, and no matter the chaotic state of mind...

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/3/2016 2:07:00 AM

Yes Poetess, he seeks to complete his heart, to fulfill the free will of love itself by uniting with his equal, his Goddess, the one that completes the glory of creation. Your lips know the romance of his wind, the nature of his need Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/2/2016 3:11:00 AM

I love the spiritual and emotional vastness that this poem covers, with soulful desires being carried "through the universe to your lips" and the very human quality of longing and love becoming so big, so real and intense, that it is this godly and universal being. ."providing asylum for the passion of their poetry"...how immensely gratifying! Such a great, brilliant poet you are, Justin. Love always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/3/2016 1:52:00 AM

In this poem God represents an eternal passion that erupts in every heart throughout the great, infinite universe, a longing and excitment to unite with a special companion whom can understand and enhance the very nature of existence. How true and beautiful your feelings are Laura, the vastness of ulimate love becoming so intimate, personal, and devotional. The passion that you instill deep within my heart makes me the Poet I am sweet Poetess...Justin