Him

When you look at me Oh god the way you look at me The way you touch my face Makes me feel alive for once I'm in love Oh honey, I'm not crying Because I'm sad Oh no I'm very happy I'm in love We've talked day and night It's only been a few days But could this wish be true Can I get a kiss I'm in love I've thought about dying But you've change my thoughts I'm so lifted with you Head over heals for you I'm in love Seeing your insecurities Is the most beautiful Part about you I'm in love Oh god I'm in love I barely have any words to explain How much meaning you have to me I'm nothing without you

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:30:00 AM

Vianna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2016 7:48:00 AM

- I enjoy reading your first poem, you write great Vianna :) - Warm welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)

Skat A

Date: 7/10/2016 3:45:00 AM

Good rant, Vianna, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/9/2016 10:32:00 PM

Romantically powerful!!!!