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High Noon For Ruth

It came to pass that in Bethlehem, Judah God sent a famine with problems most severe. Mother Naomi and her three men maneuver to strike out in sync, to leave their home sphere. Death by starvation was, of course, their main fear. It came to pass that in Moab, fate won their heart. Naomi’s two sons took on wives fairly soon. But, Death by disease broke this family apart; all three husbands were struck by its sudden harpoon. One young wife named Ruth had met her high noon. It came to pass that three women in limbo made the choice of their lives, likely unhurried. Our hero, Ruth, the poet, put things in tempo - “Entreat me not to leave you,” Ruth was worried for Naomi. “Where you die, I will be buried.” It has come to pass that over time, well-known phrase, “Entreat me not to leave you,” which Ruth composed has become a mantra for those put face to face. May it never lose the proviso Ruth proposed - “Your God, my God!” a standard upheld, unopposed.

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Date: 3/23/2014 1:01:00 AM
a lovely poem Reason..... Linda
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Date: 3/22/2014 3:58:00 PM
Reason, This is a nice entry in "Isaiah Z's RUTH contest." congratulations on your win. LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/21/2014 6:02:00 PM
Very great work telling the story of Ruth and Naomi..Way to go with your winning work..Sara
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Date: 3/21/2014 1:23:00 PM
Excellent storytelling that covers the first two chapters. I really do like this poem and how it ends with a focus on Ruth's words, something that is unique to this poem; so a little more polish to make it flow naturally and sequentially would have made it place quite a bit higher.
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:47:00 AM
Well told story of Ruth. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2014 6:14:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your great write and win my dear friend Reason. TYSM for sharing as well! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 3/21/2014 7:12:00 AM
thanks, Leonora, I welcome your support and encouragement here at PS. I will be gone for the month of April, but I'll be back.
Date: 3/21/2014 5:19:00 AM
Nice presentation on the honesty and devotion on Ruth.. Congrats on a fine win, reason
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram...one of my favorite Bible characters needless to say.
Date: 3/21/2014 2:02:00 AM
Well done Reason & congratulations on your win...Verlena
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Date: 3/3/2014 12:04:00 PM
thank you, Dave, I appreciate the compliment. I just read it and let it speak to my heart. Consider it done, the entering of the contest. PS: My real name is Ruth Tried to do this as a reply and PS gnomes wouldn't let me.
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