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Hide and Shriek

In the old house a creak We went in for a peek The floor boards all squeak A ghostly shriek Makes my knees go weak My futures looking bleak I'm on a loosing streak Please! no more hide and seek. Name : Nick Bagnall Contest : A Creepy, Scary Haunted House Poem, Please 7th place

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2011 3:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart Constance's "A Creepy, Scary, Haunted House" contest Nick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2011 11:02:00 PM

So cute, nick!! congrats on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2011 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, Nick

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/23/2011 12:39:00 AM

Nice story Nick. Congratulations

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/23/2011 12:34:00 AM

Congrats Nick on another awesome win with this haunting poetry luv.. spooky piece...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/22/2011 8:11:00 PM

Ding ding ding...I knew this would catch someone's eye....JUst the title alone speaks imagination. Great play on words. You got the knack. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/20/2011 9:12:00 AM

Hey NIck! This is a fun Halloween monorhyme. There are so many great poems on this topic on the soup...yours paves the way! Thanks for your kind comments on Cotton Stars....Appreciate it much. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2011 10:19:00 PM

super Monorhyme Nick which all comes together in scarry fashion with creepy overtones..good luck in the contest luv..well been thinking aboout your Haiku challenge from my Football Fever Fun.. working on it.. luv a good dare..oh..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2011 11:55:00 AM

Reads like a scary house in which to be..Good luck in the contest with this exciting work..I don't like scary anything..Yes, the tree frogs sing when rain comes and most of the other times they are silent..If there is a lot of moisture in the air, they will sing..They reproduce when it rains..I guess they are singing for joy..Sara

Kimberly Larocca

Date: 9/14/2011 8:31:00 AM

Very nice. It reminds me that Halloween is just around the corner. Good luck.