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Hidden Tears

His indifference was merely a façade. His head turned from me and light, But almost hidden tears were seen, Because of misty light outside. And I reach out. His fingers trail droplets as if tears, While I watch him mesmerised, Knowing inside him hidden fears Fight with composure, like the tide. And I reach out. The gesture frozen in mid-air, For he is not really there. His image lingering all around. And through the misty frame I stare, I should have shown how much I care, But he is nowhere to be found. Camouflage Me A Poem - Poetry Contest August 5, 2016

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Date: 7/30/2017 2:42:00 PM
I was sure I had a poem by the same title, I really enjoyed this Darren!
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Darren White
Date: 7/31/2017 12:08:00 AM
Thanks my friend. Now go look for your poem :)
Date: 8/12/2016 11:16:00 PM
Darren, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
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Darren White
Date: 8/14/2016 6:24:00 AM
Thank you :D It was so much fun to participate!
Date: 8/11/2016 8:57:00 AM
Hi Darren, Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis
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Darren White
Date: 8/11/2016 9:20:00 AM
Oh, great! No.6. I hadn't seen that yet :D Thank you!!
Date: 8/5/2016 9:23:00 AM
Awesome write indeed....love the imagery. Good luck in the contest...although I know this is a win!
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Darren White
Date: 8/5/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thank you! We will see what happens :)

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