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Hidden Lies

The gloomy skies that lie above us on these cold shower April days. The clouds that keep us from smiling and awake the whole day. The hidden sun that tries to find its way. Am I alive? Am I awake? I’m looking for myself through these gray days. j.m.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 9:55:00 PM

JAZLYN, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2016 11:33:00 PM

Jazlyn WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jazlyn Madrigal
Date: 1/23/2016 10:36:00 AM

Thank u so much! Looking forward to keep posting some of my work, I would love to read some of your work too! -jm

Skat A

Date: 1/22/2016 12:40:00 PM

Jazlyn Madrigal,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jazlyn Madrigal
Date: 1/23/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Skat! Looking forward to grow with the lovely poets on the site! Would love to read your work too :)