Hidden Desire

In your loveliness, I was stunned In your eloquence, I took a stand Fair and softness, I want to mold With gentle hands, not bold To every square inch I touch Planting tender kisses, a match Drum-heartbeats, rush to thud Breathing, uncontrolled dash Lips on the shades of red Unspoken desire hidden led Rumbling wanting out from head Awakening someone long dead By: olive_eloi 9:46 pm 02/08/2014

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James Fraser

Date: 11/12/2014 2:14:00 PM

Love the title. The last stanza stands out for me, it's as if I'm reading my mind. Keep writing Olive, and I'll keep reading, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/12/2014 4:49:00 PM

hahah :) i will try.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2014 1:32:00 PM

Wow Olive_eloi...now I know what hidden desires lurk inside. This is the first poem you posted; pity it has not been seen and commented on more, because it is worthy of being read and appreciated. Very romantic...with gentle and tender touches. Somehow reminds me of something that I too could write...:) enjoyed!! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/6/2014 1:46:00 PM

first poem on what???? hahahha :) its okei. am not apt for such.. though it does inspire me when i read some.. :D?? lool... hahahhaha.. thanks much for dropping by.. + olive_Eloi

Michael Byte

Date: 2/10/2014 6:06:00 AM

Beautiful poem on love the way it should be felt.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/6/2014 1:48:00 PM

thanks mike.. :)